
thats a good effort halifax, im by no means saying you suck. it jsut would need a lot to look futuristic or anything like that..
there are three spots here, :
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This is like, really fast and lame imo. but you might like it. Also, a note.
A logo is not a image, it is usualy a shape, or made up of shapes. like the A letter that adobe uses, thats the logo. but the feather image with all the pretty pictures is just a picture. the logo appears in it...
(most times)

U can suggest changes. its easy to make this kind thing[/img]