WIP: 2D Concept

rudkovsky · Post by **rudkovsky** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 6:52 pm

Looks not good? I know, it's a trash

It's must be look like mix between a human with shark, and clown mask

+ I have troubles with anatomy, if anybody can, please help.

Aryon · Post by **Aryon** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:33 pm

freaking cool draw! =O hoa!

Eigen · Post by **Eigen** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:07 pm

This is very nice. Within proper atmosphere, this could be quite a cool enemy of some sort. Kind of STALKER+Bioshock-esque. But I have one suggestion. Unless the mask is an actual part of the face, put a strap onto it, that would hold it in his face.

rudkovsky · Post by **rudkovsky** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:16 pm

Aryon wrote:freaking cool draw! =O hoa!

Thanks.

Eigen wrote:This is very nice. Within proper atmosphere, this could be quite a cool enemy of some sort. Kind of STALKER+Bioshock-esque. But I have one suggestion. Unless the mask is an actual part of the face, put a strap onto it, that would hold it in his face.

Wow, Thanks, it's good suggestion!

Dorth · Post by **Dorth** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 8:44 pm

Unless you have it sewed, glued or tacked to the face

torleif · Post by **torleif** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 11:12 pm

OP +1

Very nice, keep up the good work. TBH, I didn't notice the anatomy defects until you said so, which is a good sign. A lot of artists get so consumed with realism they lose the imaginative touch which gives them an edge.

omaremad · Post by **omaremad** » Wed Sep 10, 2008 2:32 am

Nice shading and concept, but the anatomy is a bit weird.

The V areas i marked in red should be to the side of the shoulder, they are made mostly by the deltoid. in the place you have the V shape now you could add bulging biceps.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Gray525.png

The throat area i marked in green is a bit flat at the top, also note the V shape where the SCM muscles join the sternum.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Gray1195.png

No ears, but i guess thats part of being a shark.

rudkovsky · Post by **rudkovsky** » Wed Sep 10, 2008 4:20 pm

Thanks for help and comments!

rudkovsky · Post by **rudkovsky** » Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:42 am

mk.1 · Post by **mk.1** » Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:59 am

spooky

geckoman · Post by **geckoman** » Fri Mar 13, 2009 7:57 am

really good!

Mel · Post by **Mel** » Fri Mar 13, 2009 8:57 pm

great concepts, speed painting?

rudkovsky · Post by **rudkovsky** » Fri Mar 13, 2009 9:37 pm

thx

Mel wrote:great concepts, speed painting?

thx, yes =)

upd speed

Mel · Post by **Mel** » Fri Mar 13, 2009 9:56 pm

You can say you can do something i can't! XD i don't have patience nor pulse enough to do speed paint! really good