May I have a honest opinion on how good does my intro looks?

[MasterGod]

I have created the intro to all my future games and I would like to have your opinion about how good do you think it looks?
Maybe give me suggestions on how to make it look better..

http://rapidshare.com/files/56874777/NU ... v0.8.1.rar
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=NPYW2OPW
http://up-file.com/download/027e0151751 ... 1.rar.html
http://www.mediafire.com/?crngg1mwyxm

[klikmaster]

Looks quite good so far.

Maybe the billboard for the light should appear only the letters while the light shines on it, like its reflected off the letters rather than floating in front.

[Cardinal4]

Why rapidshare? I always never get to dl anything on rapidshare since my web uses a proxy...

[MasterGod]

Looks quite good so far.

Maybe the billboard for the light should appear only the letters while the light shines on it, like its reflected off the letters rather than floating in front.

I didn't fully understand what I mean..

EDIT: Do you mean something like this?


If you do (and if you don't), does someone have any idea on to do it?

[Cardinal4]

I agree with klikmaster, the light just drifting across the screen is a bit too glaringly bland, so kinda spoils the zooming out effect.
Maybe you could increase the intensity of the light node by turning up your contrast. And lower the glare of the light sprite.
And there's a bit of an odd jarring, when the camera stops zooming and the light starts coming in.
That was really nice music though. Altogether it's a pretty nice intro.

[Zigma]

http://up-file.com/download/027e0151751 ... 1.rar.html

OMG is this true ? f... that site..............

[Umbra]

Looks kind of good but if you ask me ill make the intro in a 3d program and save it asan avi.

just my thoughts

[MasterGod]

Looks kind of good but if you ask me ill make the intro in a 3d program and save it asan avi.

just my thoughts

I'm not sure Avi format but I'll think about that..

[Obeleh]

It looks very static to me. But the idea is good imo